Constructive critisism needed.

[Henderson]

Ok, so for a while I have been messing with non diatonic notes (notes outside the scale I am using) recently I have been trying to take this concept further. This is still a track at concept stage so I understand the mix issues, I'd just be really keen to know what people think of the concept and vibe, whether its well recieved. I am just so bored of using datonic chords. haha. It will be a dl link but any feedback will be greatly apprecied.

In this track I am breaking away and making an entire phrase deliberately out of key. As for intro and structure it needs more layers I know this.

[Paralytik]

Doesn't sound very out of key for me, maybe it's just in another mode or something.

[Heigen5]

Out of key or not, I like the overall sounds you used for this. Nice rhythms and dope synths. It's hard to criticize this as so far it sounds pretty flawless to my ears.

[Paralytik]

Positive critisism is also good.

[Henderson]

Ahh cheers guys, really appreciate the feedback, I get tricked sometimes haha. Think my ears are a bit knackered at times ^^. Really appreciate you guys listening. Ill post back here when its finished, have this and another little roller in the works which has come together quite well tbh. Hopefully by the weekend they will be near finished

[areality40]

At first the rhythm had me baffled and thinking there were more rhythmic issues than anything else but once the song got going, everything fell into place. Your build is a little bit long, but once things got going I was quite impressed!

I'm not a music theorist but I will say nothing sounded off key here.